A
blog reader sent me a great question this week: "My writing group
discussed present versus past tense when writing memoir. A group
member's editor had her switch her present tense chapters to past
tense. She had some of each. Are there virtues of each or should
memoir always be past tense?"
I get this question a lot in classes, so it's always good to know the pros and cons of using past or present tense.
Just to recap, we're talking about verb tense here. Past tense sentence: John went to the game and arrived late. Present tense of the same sentence: John goes to the game and arrives late.
Although
it's risky to make such a blanket statement, I'd say that novels and
memoirs have been written almost exclusively in past tense for as long
as literature has been published. It was the way to write. Then
writers, who love to experiment, began writing a little in present
tense, here and there. It was different, startling at first to
readers. Present tense is TENSE! It's more in your face, more
breathless. But so is our world now, so modern literature, both memoir
and novels, are written in both past and present tense now.
Are
there rules? Not really. Are there effects on both reader and
writer? Definitely. It pays to know them, so you can choose
consciously.
Past tense disappears; it's so usual, we don't even notice it.
And
while present tense is immediate, fast, a little more energetic, in
your face, breathless, as said above, it calls attention to itself.
Sometimes, it comes across like a "device" the writer is using rather
than an integrated part of the story. It's a style, like using no quote
marks for dialogue. All styles call attention to themselves and have
to serve the story to be justified.
If
an editor says, Go back to past tense, it might be for this reason.
I'm just guessing because I don't know the manuscript, but that would be
one of the concerns I'd have, as an editor. Is present tense serving
the story or is it louder than the story?
Caveats:
1.
Some writers use present tense as a tool to get immediacy in the
story. Like, rewriting a chapter in present tense can give a whole new
perspective and more energy if you're stuck. I love using present tense
for this reason, but I usually switch back.
2.
A friend just got her book accepted--it's very edgy fiction and it's
written in present tense. The tense emphasizes the already edgy plot.
So it works.
3.
Some writers who use flashbacks choose one tense for the main story and
the other for the flashback. This is tricky but it's great if you can
pull it off.
Mostly, find what works for you. Read writers who write in either tense and see what effect you feel from the writing.
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